Book Title: Justis by
Nicole Stuart
ISBN 978-1-920659-11-0
Part of Series: No
Author: Nicole Stuart
Available at: Smashwords, Barnes and Noble, Kobo, Apple, Diesel, Baker-Taylor, Sony Amazon US
Amazon UK
Price: $4.99
Number of words (approximately): 54 114
Star Rating (of five): 4
Summary: A businessman
is ripped off, first by a customer and then by the Court. He concludes that the justice system is
designed to be abused by lawyers and wealthy litigants, and sets about creating
his own system of dispensing the sort of justice that people really need.
Extract:
- Jeff arrived in Miami on Friday night and
booked into an hotel near the jogging route that the target used. He was up early the next morning, dressed in
his jogging outfit, with a small backpack containing a couple of energy bars
and a bottle containing a few drops of the chemical that Swanson had given him
yesterday. There was also an absorbent
cloth for wiping up the residue of the chemical, backed by a plastic coating
and moistened with a liquid that would neutralize the chemical on contact. He jogged along the route until he found a
convenient bench, where he sat down to wait.
The target arrived a few minutes later, jogging along with no real
sincerity, watching the pretty girls on the beach. Jeff stood and then started jogging in the
same direction, more slowly, so that the man came up behind him and then moved
out to pass near to him before he’d run a couple of hundred yards. As he did so, Jeff held the plastic bottle
over his shoulder and squeezed. A nearly
invisible spray came from the bottle.
The result was dramatic. The man ran on a couple of paces, then
crashed to the ground, a look of agony on his face. Jeff stopped running and turned around at the
sound of the man falling. He stepped
quickly to the man’s side and knelt down.
He saw that the man was sweating heavily. He quickly opened his backpack, put the
squeeze bottle into it and withdrew the special cloth. He used it to wipe the man’s face and neck.
As he watched, the man
stopped breathing. Jeff turned to one of
the people standing irresolutely nearby.
“I think he’s had a heart
attack! Quick! Call 911.”
He bent over and listened to the man’s heart. There was no sound. Jeff quickly wiped the man’s face and exposed
skin again, then bent over to listen to his heart again. There was no change. He stood up, holding the cloth in one hand
and his backpack in the other, and looked around. He saw no-one with a cellphone, so he looked
inside his backpack and pulled out the cellphone he had bought on the street
yesterday. He moved away from the group
a little and made to dial 911, then put the phone to his ear and, after waiting
a few seconds, spoke.
“This is a medical
emergency. A man was running, and he
collapsed on the street. I think he’s
had a heart attack. I can’t pick up any
heartbeat!” He gave the address, moving
away from the crowd a little, supposedly to read the street names. When he closed off the fake call, he looked
around, saw no-one was looking at him.
He mopped his forehead with a fresh handkerchief from his backpack, and
moved slowly away, looking anxiously down the street, as though for the
ambulance. After a few minutes, he was
far enough from the crowd hovering around the body on the street to be able to
walk away without anyone noticing. He
was back at his hotel after a few minutes, and he went inside to shower and
change to street clothes. He stayed in
his room until ten, then checked out and went to the airport.
*~*
By Monday, Ken was able to
confirm that the wife was satisfied, and would make payment as soon as the
estate of her late husband had been cleared.
She expected that within three months, but the first payment would be
made from the proceeds of a life insurance policy, that, she expected, would be
paid out within a couple of weeks.
Reviewer’s Comments:
Structure: The book
complies with the formatting requirements for easy eBook reading. The language (American English) is good and
correctly structured.
Content: This book sets
out a belief that is not uncommon amongst non-legal people, many of whom do not
believe that the law and the legal system complies with common sense or their
concept of justice. In this case the
aggrieved businessman does something about it.
Reviewer’s Comments: The story is
credible, the underlying situation not all that uncommon, and the solution
complies with what many people would like to see. The story flows freely, taking the reader
with it to the conclusion, and giving a sense of satisfaction, coupled with a
niggling question: Why not?
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